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after having showed for the first time some details in images (the six precedent deviations)you can see here the global image.
It is my last oilpainting on Canvas(50cmx60cm),I was working on since many months,and I finally accomplished it 1 month ago.
This is my gift I dedicated and offered to one of my most precious friends,Brian:iconveiz:,for his constant support,special friendship and his great heart.:iconiamimmortalbeloved:

Critiques


:iconmaverchare:
It seems a like a time-consuming and very nice gift. The girl is good-looking, the animals aren’t too shabby either, and the grass faces is a nice touch.

But there is an issue I find with the placement of these good looking elements. It looks more like a collage of separate pieces rather than part of the same frame. If that was your intent, as in separate glimpses, I think some sort of fading or blurring between the various parts might help that idea along.

If the woman and the animals are supposed to share the same frame though it's a whole lot trickier. The biggest issues that keeps them from looking like they share the same plot of land is the slightly variance in angle and the fact that they don’t seem to be sharing the same vanishing point.

Adding a bit more details from the animals surroundings, like the birds branch and the lionesses rock, and perhaps more of the leopards body peeking through the grass could perhaps help.

Also I find the woman’s head just a bit on the big side compared to the rest of her body. She’s got very good skin though ;)
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:iconzulou:
in one word beautiful :iconiloveyouplz:

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when you have some free time watch my galery and tell me what you think about it...
:iconvaledhelven:
It's fabulous! :deviation: I love it, especially the little faces peering out of the grass at you :) Great work, my friend! :hug: And a fine dedication to another wonderful friend, too :nod:

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Welcome to MY fantasy realm: [link]
:iconmisty2007:
Beautiful work hun love it and he will adore this you know it...amazing work as always :hug: :heart:

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Darkness creeps over lifes golden sun
birth makes us differant
death makes us one.
:iconveiz:
Wow, This was really beautiful, my dear friend!:iconcheerplz: What a wonderful gift! I know you been working on it for many many months, and that alone makes it special. I love it!:icondesmo100:
:iconnewhugplz::iconthesundiver:All the details and the setting is beautiful!:iconbigheartplz:
:iconnataly1st:
Absolutely amazing work, my dear!!! :hug::heart::blowkiss:

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Treat your friends as you would your paintings and show them in their best light.
:iconlilok-lilok:
Stunning work! Very beautiful and gorgeous! :icondarkmarek:
:iconsvet-svet:
:iconwowplz: Excellent art!:clap: Impressive scene , superbly done!:iconrizikleo:
This is perfect composition!:blowkiss::kiss::blowkiss::kiss::blowkiss::kiss::blowkiss:
:iconmattthesamurai:
Magnifique travail, les détails sont à couper le souffle !

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~~ Let Your Life Burn ~~
Fire Dusk [link]
:icondragonschest:
Fantastic Flori, this is over the top crazy good... :icondancingcatplz:

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We must always match our faith with the truth, then it will move mountains...
:iconmari-na:
Great work!I love the idea,simply wonderful my dear Flori!:iconnikpavel:

Details

June 1
649 KB
145 KB
600×800

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Camera Data

NIKON
COOLPIX S50c
10/3200 second
F/4.1
16 mm
100
Apr 30, 2009, 1:21:29 PM

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