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oil painting on Canvas(50cmx60cm)...and she says "look into my paradise...where only peace and harmony is reigning..." that's how the world could be, in imagination.....it would be so fantastic and easy...If we could repeat the story of Adam and Eve...but without temptations,the door of paradise would be closed from inside for for evil...I am conscious, that I am just a incorrigible dreamer... youtu.be/LCCiwPEdEpg (Ozzy Osbourne "I am just a dreamer" )...
youtu.be/ZGoWtY_h4xo (Bryan Adams "everything I do " )
youtu.be/ZGoWtY_h4xo (Bryan Adams "everything I do " )
Image size
1536x2048px 1.68 MB
Make
NIKON
Model
COOLPIX S50c
Shutter Speed
10/3200 second
Aperture
F/4.1
Focal Length
16 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 30, 2009, 1:21:29 PM
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It seems a like a time-consuming and very nice gift. The girl is good-looking, the animals aren’t too shabby either, and the grass faces is a nice touch.
But there is an issue I find with the placement of these good looking elements. It looks more like a collage of separate pieces rather than part of the same frame. If that was your intent, as in separate glimpses, I think some sort of fading or blurring between the various parts might help that idea along.
If the woman and the animals are supposed to share the same frame though it's a whole lot trickier. The biggest issues that keeps them from looking like they share the same plot of land is the slightly variance in angle and the fact that they don’t seem to be sharing the same vanishing point.
Adding a bit more details from the animals surroundings, like the birds branch and the lionesses rock, and perhaps more of the leopards body peeking through the grass could perhaps help.
Also I find the woman’s head just a bit on the big side compared to the rest of her body. She’s got very good skin though <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />